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Post by Rosiiii1 on Apr 11, 2003 13:37:19 GMT -5
This and all other fics were deleted by Rosiiii due to a request by mb20 that I leave her board.
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Post by Rosiiii1 on Apr 11, 2003 13:48:03 GMT -5
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Post by Rosiiii1 on Apr 11, 2003 14:08:08 GMT -5
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Post by Rosiiii1 on Apr 11, 2003 14:17:48 GMT -5
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Post by Rosiiii1 on Apr 11, 2003 14:35:42 GMT -5
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Post by Rosiiii1 on Apr 11, 2003 14:53:15 GMT -5
A quick thanks and mucho credit to my beta-pal and fanfic writing workshop pal Sarah, for her excellent suggestions and wonderful ideas. Rosiiii  |
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Post by jevees on Apr 11, 2003 19:27:24 GMT -5
That was so good rosiii, ok, because of this post i arrived late to my italian lesson, and i`m not complaining... nice, very nice... I couldn`t move from the chair... really congrats!! ;D Ahhh and we`ll wait for the next post.. hope it`s soon!  |
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Post by juliana106 on Apr 11, 2003 19:27:26 GMT -5
...gasp... ...gulp... ...thud... ...newly regained consciousness and recently picked up from the floor, as my composure returns along with my few typeable (by standards of decency <G> ) thoughts -- the beta run didn't do this justice... another *R*classic, though I am wondering why this wouldn't forever be known as "The (Sexual) Healing"? Can't you just hear Marvin Gaye singing in the background, as LuLu crawls slowly out of bed with her mischevious smile, Nick creeps downstairs, still grinning, and Caroline toasts her successful endeavor with a fresh dry martini? DH, get y'er act together and take a look -- is this our opening scene for 4/22? |
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Post by cecilia on Apr 11, 2003 19:30:12 GMT -5
Rosiiiii.......READ IT TWICE AND LOVE IT!..... ;D I pictured every scene in my mind and ended  ... I like this sweet-as-a-pie Nick Fallin a lot!....and Rosiiii... I thought oreos would never be the same to me after "the kiss"....now, every time I looked at a cherry ice cream I know for sure I´ll have nick´s grin poppin´up in my head!....not bad at all....!....sort of terrible for my hips!.... KEEP WRITING, PLEEEEEEEASE!  ....and thanks for this really enjoyable piece of fanfic! ....and Sister Pete setting them up...  .....I love RM!....she is so  |
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Post by Rosiiii1 on Apr 11, 2003 19:50:45 GMT -5
Thanks guys -- your feedback is very much appreciated! Love the comments...and OMG Sarah..I wish I had thought of that dry martini for Caroline! LMAO!! |
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Post by lambertoise on Apr 11, 2003 20:11:30 GMT -5
Thanks Rosiiiii. You have the guts to dream out loud! Your fiction is like a nice movie, enlightening this first spring evening here!
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Post by cecilia on Apr 11, 2003 21:12:10 GMT -5
Thanks Rosiiiii. You have the guts to dream out loud! Your fiction is like a nice movie, enlightening this first spring evening here! Here, it warmed a really cold fall evening!...that´s part of the fan of the board, isn´t it?...:angel2: |
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Post by quilter on Apr 13, 2003 19:19:50 GMT -5
Rosiii1
I really enjoy your fan fiction and this one is no different. Yoou have a wonderful imagination and you are able express your ideas and stories in such a way that the reader interacts with the story and the characters.
Are you a writer by profession? If not, you should consider a career in journalism and /or writing.
Thank you for the entertaining fan fictions of the past and I look forward to readying your future fan fictions.
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Post by Rosiiii1 on Apr 14, 2003 10:39:44 GMT -5
Aww- Thanks so much quilter. No, I'm not a writer by profession, I'm flattered that you think I could be. I'm just trying to get better and better at it, as I go along. The Guardian/Nick Fallin, as well as all the other fanfics I read (and you guys! ;D )...have inspired me to write more. Thanks again! :bouncing::bouncing::bouncing: |
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Post by cloud9 on Apr 18, 2003 17:56:18 GMT -5
Rosiii:  As always you've created a perfect little jewel of a story. You really do have a talent for writing short fiction---you know the routine: a beginning, a middle, and an ending tied up with a pretty little bon mot at the end. (Lots of fanfic just seems to go on, and on, and on before the resolution.) And the 'voices' for N & Lu ring very true. I can hear them saying this dialog loudly and clearly. Thanks. ---cloud9 |
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As always you've created a perfect little jewel of a story.