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Post by iiiitch on Apr 28, 2003 22:09:57 GMT -5
wrapping this up folks ...
(Lulu's house. There is a knock at the door. Lulu opens the door. Nick is there.)
LULU: Nick!
NICK: I hope you don't mind?
LULU: No! No. Come in.
(He comes in and they stand by the door. There is an awkward pause.)
NICK: The other day. I overheard ..
LULU: What?
NICK: About the baby..
LULU: Oh
NICK: I know .. look you almost died before and .. I don't think you should risk this
LULU: Oh .. well actually I got a second opinion. There really isn't that much of a risk. I mean. I'll have to cut back my hours. Probably work part time. But it will be fine.
NICK: Oh. .. Ok
(another awkward pause)
NICK: So you are having it?
LULU: Yes
NICK: Lulu .. you know .. I'm here
LULU: I know
NICK: I mean .. anything .. if you need anything .
LULU: Thanks
NICK: Well ..
LULU: (small laugh) Well..
NICK: I'll be going
LULU: Ok
(he opens the door and walks out .. Lulu watches him. He hesitates turns.)
NICK: Lulu
LULU: A ha?
NICK: I'm glad.
(they both smile - he turns and leaves)
THE END
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Post by iiiitch on Apr 28, 2003 22:11:07 GMT -5
I'm so tempted to take out those last five lines.
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Post by juliana106 on Apr 28, 2003 22:37:43 GMT -5
Sorry for the delay in additions, but final exam week has started...  Hopefully I will be able to post a few more segments to continue the fic before the new episode tomorrow.  |
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Post by Rosiiii1 on Apr 28, 2003 23:04:13 GMT -5
fallinfan (guest..heh) wrote: Yes you're right fallinfan -- I was very rude and vulgar to a person posting who was equally rude and vulgar to a very nice person who has been generous enough with her time and talent in the midst of her finals, to treat us to her wonderful fanfic. I'm sorry it's my posting that you have a problem with, and not this jealous nasty spoilsport (b)iiiitch who wants to ruin this thread for everyone else. Sorry fallinfan, but not everyone is as polite and kind as Sarah...what's more, those who are extremely nasty to her deserve all they might get at the hands of her fellow posters who are enjoying her posts and this thread. I am surprised, after reading this (b)iiiitch's mean, nasty and lame ramblings to Sarah, you chose to respond to her in a very vague non-direct almsot considerate way (i.e, "oh well..I guess some people are biased.") -- and eagerly chose to single me out to insult and malign directly instead. You've got me thinking you might even be a close pal of ol' (b)itchiiii's.  Hmmmmm...could it be...that we have yet another SBOL hater in our midst? Do I know you from SBOL too? LOL! C'mon fess up dearie. |
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Post by iiiiitch on Apr 28, 2003 23:55:02 GMT -5
I hate no-one but you dearie.
In fact I feel rather bad about being impolite to Sarah. Misdirected anger, which I regret. It should of course have been directed at you.
Sarah I apologise for being uncouth in my criticism. This is not to say that I believe the criticism was unwarranted. In fact I intend to go back and "nice-up" the comments.
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Post by fallinfan on Apr 29, 2003 11:38:41 GMT -5
fallinfan (guest..heh) wrote: Sorry fallinfan, but not everyone is as polite and kind as Sarah...what's more, those who are extremely nasty to her deserve all they might get at the hands of her fellow posters who are enjoying her posts and this thread. :uhoh: So you got my drift??:uhoh: It's not Sarah I'm talking about,.............she's very nice and polite, and she writes great fanfic! ;D That's why you should follow suit, because it's not the first time you have posted nasty and vulgar outbursts......just because...........:cussing: Maybe the Judge can order you also into anger management. Heehee!!!!:bouncing::bouncing: |
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Post by iiiitchypoo on Apr 29, 2003 12:36:02 GMT -5
Lovely ending iiiitch! You do this so well!
iiiitchypoo
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Post by Rosiiii1 on Apr 29, 2003 12:52:07 GMT -5
;D It's as I expected, the actual thread name "Daddy Nick & Mommy Lulu," not to mention the mushy lusty fanfics from several quarters, have been driving them insane and "iiiitchy," the whole time. Hee! I guess I'm doing something right -- I always know I'm on the right track when certain people go apesh*t. :devilgrin: Now that the actual show is mirroring what some of the TG/N&LL fans have only dreamed about, they are losing it altogether!! Muahahaha!! :devilfinger: |
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Post by iiiitchypoo on Apr 29, 2003 12:54:06 GMT -5
You're not driving us insane Rosiiii, however if it will help us to be more like you, then perhaps we will try to become insane. After all, that's all we want to do!
iiiitchypoo
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Post by Rosiiii1 on Apr 29, 2003 13:29:00 GMT -5
I've got an idea then - why don't you try to become "more like me," by actually posting something of interest on this site that people look forward to reading? Instead of being "you," and insulting nice talented people like Sarah -- and making fun of the some of the most often read threads on this board. It..oh, I don't know...makes you look kind of STUPID. :devilfinger: You're swimming against the tide little iiiitchy fishy.  |
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Post by atotaltotalfan2001 on Apr 29, 2003 16:55:34 GMT -5
What happened to this thread?  ? Here I was, having a lovely time reading this fiction, and suddenly I felt like I was back at SBOL, trying to figure out how to read the various opinions while also avoiding the extreme cat fighting. I'd love it if you all could return to the story. Seeing Nick trying to help LuLu breath through her contractions would be so sweet. Almost as touching, I bet, as seeing him don an apron to make Lulu happy (though not as sexy I'm sure) . |
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Post by jevees on Apr 29, 2003 19:47:06 GMT -5
Hey girls, why you don`t you forget this little fight and let`s just enjoy the fanfic..please I really like this board, I feel comfortable.. so if someone doesn`t like one fanfic just skip it and read another one, i mean i didn`t like all the stories i read, there were plots that i didn`t like so i stop reading them and that`s all. it `s not that big thing.. there are a lot of stories to read so tried another one!
Please this board is to share our thoughts and have a good time(because we love talking about the same thing), just cut this and please let`s have respect to others work....ok? ;D
Nice... I like you posts Sarah so please continued... and good luck for your finals!
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Post by iiiiitch on Apr 30, 2003 8:49:49 GMT -5
You suffer delusions of adequacy.
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Post by quilter on Apr 30, 2003 15:13:27 GMT -5
The fanfic of Daddy Nick and Mommy Lulu has been great to read and enjoy. The insight into the cahracters are so true to TG. It sounds as though everyone but perhaps one person has ejoyed the postings and would like to see the ending.
This site is open to anyone that is interested in TG. Perhaps the one person (I believe he goes by iiiiiitch) should direct his disapproval and unhappiness to a site that would better meet his needs. Obviously this is the the site.
Too bad you have reuined it for others. The fanfic is great and interesting. Really holds one attention, even with the stage directions.
Please refrain from causing others to miss the fun the fanfic offer to the readers.
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Post by quilter on Apr 30, 2003 15:18:27 GMT -5
Please forgive the misspelled words and the lack of "not" in the sentence indicating this is "not" the site for iiiiitch.
It seems my anger and frustration got ahead of my fingers and my brain.
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